Our rough cut feedback 

After showing our peers our second rough copy, we received the following feedback :

What went well 
- Fond of the introduction- especially the music when the liquid dropped
- Good use of audio and effects
-Good use of font effects to show characters names
-The date included
-The handheld camera
Even better if 
- The sound was turned down throughout the movie
- The dark scenes to be re-shot
- Protagonist should speak louder
- A different transition was used at first because the change between the introduction and first scene was too harsh
-The scenes were lighter