Provisional movie pitch  opening feedback 

Here is the feedback I was given by my peers ;

What went well...
- the camera was used effectively and the sound included matched the scene
- good use of camera angles at the start of the scene
- The breathing when recording behind the trees was very effective
- The sound used built a great amount of tension
- clear storyline
-The camera angle used when Fernanda was taking a photo
-Good use of handheld camera angles

Even better if...
-The quality of lighting was improved
- The flip transition didn't fit the horror genre
-The sound used whilst Fernanda is talking is too loud