Thursday, 6 February 2014


Here is a link to our horror movie rough cut http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A39uZBq1YX4

After showing this to our peers, we received the following feedback :

Positive
- nice title sequence and production company logo
- very good choice of music
-Nice film opening scene

Improvements
- The overall volume seems to be too loud
-Various dark scenes
-Very fast transitions which needs to be

In order to improve our short film, myself and my group have met up outside of lesson time to attempt to incorporate the above feedback into our final copy in order to improve our final overall grade.

1 comment:

  1. Please post your feedback on your rough cut.

    Your production company logo and title sequence looks good and your music choice is great. Look at the transition from title to film as it is quite fast. You also need to look at the volume levels as the music is very loud.

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