Class and teacher feedback film pitch 
Overall , Fernanda, Kristal and myself felt that we received was generally positive and the feedback that we received from both our peers and Miss Hiltunen was very constructive and we plan to incorporate the suggestions that we received into our horror film opening .
Some of our peers felt that our animatic was ' too short' due to the fact that we edited and cut down our visuals to add effect we can rectify this by extending the length of our shot to fill the specific time requirement.
Many also felt that they would have liked to have seen more of a 'variety ' of shot types we can again easily rectify this problem by slightly altering the pictures used when filming our actual opening.
As well as this, many said that we revealed slightly too much of our story in the animatic and it reduced the overall build up to the film and the overall plot was revealed much too early and a great deal interest was lost within the first few scenes if this happened within our actual recording, we would have no real story to continue because the whole plot would have been condensed into a few brief moments 
in Order to respond to the feedback given, we will try and extend certain significant scenes as well as perhaps re-shooting various scenes in order to increase the variety of shot types within the film itself in order to allow us to have the ability to gain more marks.