Feedback regarding our horror film pitch 

 Having missed Thursday's lesson, after speaking with Kristal and Fernanda, I discovered that we received both positive and constructive feedback from both my classmates and Miss Hiltunen.
I discovered that many of my peers liked our initial idea of having a young girl as our main protagonists  ( due to the fact that they feel that playing on childhood fears creates a certain atmosphere which makes them feel scared and uncomfortable) but also felt that we could further develop our ideas in order to add effect to our opening scene such as having less dialogue to create a much more effective atmosphere.
    As a group, we have taken these suggestions on board and have since made changes to our initial story such as adding additional scenes such as :
- More of a detailed opening
- Adding more actors/ actresses to fulfil the role of additional characters ( e.g adding an extra male to fit in with the 'bullying' of the protagonist)- This will make our initial idea of 'teenagers walking through the park' much more realistic.
- Including various other shot types in addition to the shots types we have previously discussed.
These suggestions will further improve our film opening and the additional scenes that we incorporated really take our film opening to a new level which we previously unable to reach due to the fact that we had no/very little  outside suggestions from our peers.